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I just made a new layout draft, looks pretty decent in my opinion, but I would like some other peoples comments on it as well. Looks pretty good in all non-ancient browsers except MacIE 5.2.

http://www.veracon.net/37/
Starnox
yup, looks very nice - well done original.gif

Maybe a bit more colour tongue.gif

Hmm shouldn't this be in webdesign?
IAIHMB
Lacking color, very little contrast. I would add padding around the left and right sides of the text, almost blends in to the gradient edges. tongue.gif
Oblivion.
I like that border! wub.gif
Payton
The shadows look nice but it needs more color, right now it's kinda boring.
princetontiger
i don't like it.

mundane and mechanical.
Wombat
It's hard to get a real feel for a particular design without actually seeing REAL content in it. Lorem Ipsum and other dummy texts should generally be avoided. Spend a little extra time and work real content into the design.

That said, I like this design. It's clean, simple and professional. The text does need some padding around it though. I can't really say much more without seeing actual content in place. original.gif
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It's padded a bit more now, you may have to do a hard refresh to see it. I'll attempt putting some more colour in there.
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Updated version up, however I can't get it validating with the CSS because I use -moz-opacity in a few places. Also it appears there're a lot of parse errors, as if it doesn't read the newlines. I use Unix linebreaks by the way.

http://www.veracon.net/37/
Starnox
Still needs more colour tongue.gif, make the logo have nice bright colours, then you can use it as a transparent background for the txt to make the whole design a bit more colourful... just my opinion.
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Updated again.
IAIHMB
You're getting there, but I have a few more suggestions. tongue.gif

-Use some sort of mouseover animation for the navigation, the extra border on the bottom left me expecting something. tongue.gif
-Using a logo that wide is bound to get accidental clicks.
-Remove the mouseover animation on the featured work bit?

tongue.gif
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1.) I'll think of a good one, maybe one making an arrow below the bottom border. tongue.gif
2.) I don't quite get what you're saying? unsure.gif Oh, I understand. I just happen to usually click not exactly on the logo, so it's good for me, but I might change it.
3.) It's not animated, but I may remove it anyway. Removed. Now it's also valid CSS.
Starnox
more colour dammit tongue.gif laughing.gif
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But where? :\
Starnox
Not sure, a nice photo is always a good method... you will just have to take it yourself unless you can find a decent free one.
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I don't see what photo would fit in that kind of site. o_o
Starnox
a studio tongue.gif
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Update: http://www.veracon.net/37/new/: Changed the 'Featured Work' part to 'Latest Work' and reorganized it a bit. Better? Worse?
Starnox
Slowly getting there tongue.gif
princetontiger
looks better than the first composite.

it needs "something else"
Payton
QUOTE(Veracon @ Apr 10 2005, 02:18 AM)
Update: http://www.veracon.net/37/new/: Changed the 'Featured Work' part to 'Latest Work' and reorganized it a bit. Better? Worse?
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"latest work" box needs more of a margin on its left side.
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